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Monday, February 25, 2013


In Language Arts for 5th grade today we are doing observations to build into an observation essay.  I was showing Priscilla what observations are.  So I did one on bread, and will post it here to whet your appetite :)

Bread Observations

Wafting fragrance of yeasty air
Golden flaky crust eager to break with the serrated blade
Warm and squishy, tiny sacks wait to spring on my tongue
Crisp, firm, outer.
Soft, moist, inner.
Sweet honey-butter smoothly spread
The first bite
Gentle to teeth
A slight crunch
Then the melt
Sweetly blankets tastebuds that, like sponges,
Soak in the gooey goodness.

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